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I have shown this draft to multiple people already, and going through various iterations am fairly sure it is close to shipping, but i want to get a last round of feedback before i release the gold standard of my next Item: the Shifting Armoury.

The Item is supposed to have an open collaborative log for everyone to contribute afterwards; I worked long and hard to get the CSS for the attribution working in a user-friendly way. Some people already expressed interest in contributing, so I hope it won't stay empty for to long.

Oh, and should anyone actually speak latin and be willing to correct my horribly mangled names in their, i'd appreciate that too!

EDIT: Looks i somehow managed to introduce a format breaking bug with my last spell checking. it's fixed now.

Shifting Armoury by ZescZesc, 23 Nov 2020 17:24

I don't believe the Insurgency let him go.

They do try to find him, but he had an item on him when he left, that explicitly negates feelings of consequences and danger (as seen by the Doctor just going into a test chamber with an unsecured test subject).

Oh, for stunts like these there are punishments. He better hope the hole he is hiding in is deep.


Fighting Monsters and Language since 2016.

Sounds like the kid was a normal student boy, how does he know that the 2 of the most secret organizations existed. And that 1 of them are even looking for him. Doesnt really make sense.

by Commander MaynardCommander Maynard, 23 Nov 2020 03:17

Loved the page, good Idea. But the ending was rather confusing. I don't think The Chaos Insurgency would let you go with all that knowledge. I mean, you used the item. It would be punishable, I wished for a different ending, Eitherway. Congratulations again.

I understood maybe half of that, but I liked what I understood (+1).


Fighting Monsters and Language since 2016.

by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 20 Nov 2020 20:06

I read it and there seems to be something missing for me.

You set up a pretty good setup in that the base he moves to seems to already be under an anomalous effect. I was waiting for the pay-off to that.

Also, you set up this girl that talks to toys in the beginning and than move on after her death. I was waiting on how you tie her back in later. This setup also goes nowhere.

In the end I was convinced that the mask was sad that one of its friends had died and was therefore trying to suck out everyones attention, in hopes of finding someone else to talk to and in the end settling for using the doctors diary to get the girl permanently (or at least until Jack is found) engraved in the minds of agents that need to study the case from now on.

It feels like two different stories that don't connect very well.

No vote from me, but congratulation on your first successful tale (speaking as someone who had many failures before something finally stuck).


Fighting Monsters and Language since 2016.

by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 20 Nov 2020 19:26

If google does not has the file we can not just assume that this in not an original. Preventive deletions are a practice I strongly disagree with. I assume innocence until proven guilty.


Fighting Monsters and Language since 2016.

by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 20 Nov 2020 12:34
Re: Negrito by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 20 Nov 2020 12:31

Then arguably to avoid a lawsuit we should change it in case it's not CC-compliant.


Xythinien's alt. Long story, I promise.

by AtypicallyAzathothAtypicallyAzathoth, 19 Nov 2020 21:14

Congratulation to you for your first tale, I hope you will continue on this path and that you will enjoy telling us stories.


J'ai deux nouvelles, une mauvaise et une bonne
La mauvaise nouvelle c'est que je ne peux pas forcer les gens à m'accepter ou à m'aimer
La bonne nouvelle c'est que j'en ai rien à foutre

by Miranda RichsterMiranda Richster, 19 Nov 2020 20:35

Troll edits have been reverted since neither Malycegraves nor Bluesoul admin here

Negrito by MGravesIsANiggerMGravesIsANigger, 19 Nov 2020 18:44

Troll edits reverted since neither MalyceGraves nor Bluesoul are here

Negrito by MGravesIsANiggerMGravesIsANigger, 19 Nov 2020 18:41

My first solo tale,
Special thanks to BaronjoeBaronjoe and ZescZesc for their feedback!


I tip my hat to the barred owl in the trees, and wipe my feet before entering the whitetails home

by ScaledDaturaScaledDatura, 18 Nov 2020 21:26

Credit should be given. I put it through an image search, but it came up empty. The only three sites that use it are from the Insurgency.


Fighting Monsters and Language since 2016.

by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 17 Nov 2020 18:25

Had you not pointed at it, I would not have seen the self-upvote, but now I did. Please fix that.


Fighting Monsters and Language since 2016.

Um… shouldn't we have an image credit here?


Xythinien's alt. Long story, I promise.

by AtypicallyAzathothAtypicallyAzathoth, 16 Nov 2020 23:27

All you have is your fire
And the place you need to reach
Don't you ever tame your demons
But always keep them on a leash
-Andrew John Hozier-Byrne, Arsonist's Lullaby

The long-awaited (well, not really) sequel to Nevermore! Thanks to BaronjoeBaronjoe and all my offline friends who critiqued this and helped refine it over a very, very long time!

Kudos to all of you for waiting, as well!


Xythinien's alt. Long story, I promise.

Author Post by AtypicallyAzathothAtypicallyAzathoth, 16 Nov 2020 23:13

Thank you all so very much! This is the fourth highest-rated Item on the site!!!


Xythinien's alt. Long story, I promise.

Like (+1) last time around.

Still think this is a disaster waiting to happen.


Fighting Monsters and Language since 2016.

Once again. by Meta WonderratMeta Wonderrat, 14 Nov 2020 20:33

Witching Well was opened.

The Halloween item that was just late enough to release on a Friday the 13th.


Fighting Monsters and Language since 2016.

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