He was responsible for improving a Human Serum to its modern form and creation of a healthy person 3.1 meters tall. In the year 2000 he decided to retire.
This still contradicts the source
the previous "Human Serum" that was discontinued in 2001 after failures to enhance existing humans
In the year 1973 during one of raids Rebellion performed at Site he was working in, he decided to escape and join the Insurgency. His,later discovered, experiments were used as one of the reasons to to establish an Foundational Ethics Committee.
Why would the works of an Insurgent lead to the formation of a Foundation institution and than be known to the Insurgency that this was the case? For this to happen there must have been a flow of information like this:
The Foundation knows of Insurgency experiments.
The Foundation sees the works of an external Insurgent as requiring an internal restriction mechanism.
The Insurgency knows about reasons why the Foundation does things.
SCR-851 was at first distrusted, as he was refusing to give any information abaut his invention, only saying that "he found it on the far east" yet as his experiments were giving satisfactional effects he was allowed to worf freely without limitations of Ethics.
Part one and part two of the sentences have nothing to do with each other.
His ability to keep his mouth shut for 20+ years while constantly working with the Insurgency is ether unrealistic (as the works of one man do not outweigh the benefits of having hundreds work on the thing (which would have been the case if the Insurgency had just "extracted" his knowledge)) or commendable (you need to pull some serious stunts to not have the Insurgency WANT to crack open your mind (the "we are your colleges, we know each other for 10+ years, you can tell us" strategy is rather hard to defeat, because the consequences are measured in social penalties. Hermits can do that, but I have not read the file as indicating complete social/professional isolation.))
many of some
many of which
Also, if it is of use to the Insurgents we usually do not part with it for a visit to the grand book-reading. You can spin this whole affair into its own tale because the extraordinary premise "The insurgency thought a trade like this would most likely be worth it" requires explanation.
He died in his sleep in 2001 at the age of 74. The same day the earliest Instances of Human Serum were discovered.
Than what did he work on his whole life? If you mean to say that modern human serum was discovered in 2001 than we have the following problem:
the previous "Human Serum" that was discontinued in 2001 after failures to enhance existing humans
The original human serum failed to meet expectations
and
a Jewish ritual recovered from a raid of the Foundation in 2002
I know I gave you the date of 2001 as the earliest, but it is actually 2002. For the full review I lean more on the text as posted and not my memory of it.
In case you were never exposed to it, this is a link to the original human serum as written by EdAWACSdenyY.
