Hello there, yet again some unordered commentary.
Amount X is kind of weird. I think a “How much is needed” approach would work better.
I think some more editing would go a long way for your articles. The second the top and sidebar disappear the page feels very empty. Just some div blocks with a fresh background or smth like that.
Again, some weird nit-picks. Like the use of the word sub strain. A therapy dog and a service dog can share the same breed.
“Deployment of substrains 1 to 3 are no longer prohibited.” When and why? Did I miss it?
You can a bit to surgical for my taste. Sometimes simpler words would convey the Items behaviour better.
Im not an expert but wouldn’t but grinding smth into subatomic pieces be disastrous?
This sounds very negative overall, but it still works +1.
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