Prelude To Chaos / Discussion

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I legit Approve dis

Agent E 28 Jul 2015 18:10

I am aware of the fact that this is just a prelude, but I do look forward to see more of this series. What I like especially is that how well you develop character. My favorite part of the tale was in fact when Eris thought of memetic kill agent and it's effect. Like him, the idea of such technology always kind of bewildered me. At the same time it displayed Eris' uncertainty to utilize items to the best degree. +1

The only thing that bothers me:

The Insurgency is dead. Long live the Chaos Insurgency

This is a cool phrase, no question on that. But it is kiiiind of overused, especially after its usage by the GOC. Just an opinion though.

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Re: I legit Approve dis

Doctor Halsey 28 Jul 2015 18:52

First of all thanks for the upvote. As far as the line you mentioned in your post. I had no idea that it was used so heavily elsewhere. To be honest I was gonna try to make it Haos' slogan for the falchion revolution as I also mention it in my rewrite of poor insurgency, but if it really irks you I guess I could remove it.

Halsedit: Prelude to Chaos is intended this to be a prologue of sorts to Procedure Aleph 11 Tango. Sorry but I never intended on expanding on Eris, or even Prometheus for that matter. If you think they hold merit I could try to write a bit more about them…

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Re: I legit Approve dis

Agent E 28 Jul 2015 19:02

The reason that the line did not stand out as much in the Poor Insurgency was because it was not intended to be the final line. In fact, Dr. Creed sort of uttered that line casually, or even sarcastically, which seems to me as if he was mocking at the new Insurgency's cliche slogan.

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Re: I legit Approve dis

DrCaduceus 28 Jul 2015 22:36

I think Prometheus and Eris do well as stand-alone story characters. However if there were one or two more stories that include them, I would not protest.

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DrSuppose 06 Jun 2018 00:34

The number of upvotes this has as a prelude to something bigger is a good indicator of how much people want to see more. Oh, where have all the good men gone?

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