I am aware of the fact that this is just a prelude, but I do look forward to see more of this series. What I like especially is that how well you develop character. My favorite part of the tale was in fact when Eris thought of memetic kill agent and it's effect. Like him, the idea of such technology always kind of bewildered me. At the same time it displayed Eris' uncertainty to utilize items to the best degree. +1
The only thing that bothers me:
The Insurgency is dead. Long live the Chaos Insurgency
This is a cool phrase, no question on that. But it is kiiiind of overused, especially after its usage by the GOC. Just an opinion though.
Agent E | "Life is beautiful. Let the future generations cleanse it of all evil, oppression and violence, and enjoy it to the full.” -Leon Trotsky