Remedion / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page Remedion.

Heartful 15 Feb 2015 12:40

This is awesome, although now I expect an intricate and surprising backstory that leaves me with my jaw open, so you better deliver.
But, for reals, this is great. +1
also announce it dammit

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Agent E 16 Feb 2015 07:16

ooh i liek lost gods

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Doctor Halsey 18 Mar 2015 21:57

a bit (too?) powerful, but its autonomy offsets that. This article is a bit long but the content is engaging so overall good. The content is quite intriguing and that pushes me into up vote territory, good job Cad.

Remedion Redeemed

DrCaduceus 29 Aug 2016 06:26

Redemption. For Remedion. As I have promised.

Changes:

• I always felt iffy about Remedion being a simple medical library. And I've always pictured Remedion as part of the Special Unit teams any way, hovering beside other freaks and laser-ing wounded operators to recovery while deflecting gunfire. So, I've changed his primary Usage from reliquary to an anomalous field medic. (This is also because of my current canon that the Insurgency requires action/motion for its anomalous items, rather than sitting them still in containment, more than anyone else.)
• Cleaned the Report at the third paragraph due to some changes in backstory. Plus, I did not like the direction the Inruch history and society was going with the original, so I downplayed those parts a bit and focused on more normal stuff.
• Reworked the Interview to provide more insight on Remedion and Inruch (and no Written King drivel¹).
• I think dialogue has been improved. Habanchi asks good questions this time.
• General polish.

I hope this rework of Remedion will be successful, and better than the original article.

Footnotes

1. To be honest, the WK was a forced addition from the start. The concept could work in another article.

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