Request Form 12-A
Personnel: Dr. Martin Caduceus
Material Requested: One microphone, one speaker and a real-time uplink to quaesitor.Status: Approved
+1
it's a real heart warmer you got there, good job.
Halsedit: that and the bert-erflies, love the bert-erflies.
Dammit great job cad
Okay…I will try to alter my mental arsenal.
Bert-terflies
…And +1'd
Agent E | "Life is beautiful. Let the future generations cleanse it of all evil, oppression and violence, and enjoy it to the full.” -Leon Trotsky
I tried doing romantic… I have never read a love novel, so I wrote this with no idea with what I'm doing.
… But I always know what's best.
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Nowadays people rarely read love novels. If you want practice in that area, just flip into any recent young adult novel. Boom, make out scene.
Agent E | "Life is beautiful. Let the future generations cleanse it of all evil, oppression and violence, and enjoy it to the full.” -Leon Trotsky
This may be a bit late, but I invite you to check the Filipino young adult romance section. Check the legionry and cry. Gasp at how many goddamned love novels get published and turned into movies. I said gasp. COWER,
;_; It's not faiiiiir.
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I know I've already psuedo pitched in with my (air quote) prequel (air quote), and asteroids (but technically asteroids came before and should be fine). I was wondering whether or not I could make a story around this dealy, and how when Cad does not do his work and instead flirts with quaesitor life gets harder for the rest of us.
Don't worry Halsey. I have some absurd ideas up my sleeve.
Agent E | "Life is beautiful. Let the future generations cleanse it of all evil, oppression and violence, and enjoy it to the full.” -Leon Trotsky
oh, eye see. Well then you shall chronicle the next chapter in the tale of Cad and Quaesitor…
You know now what is difficult? Writing romance. Cad has written it so goddamned good that I felt like it's going to take eons to make another fitting tale to this. Sometimes I wonder if when Cad is writing this tale he was really…nevermind.
Agent E | "Life is beautiful. Let the future generations cleanse it of all evil, oppression and violence, and enjoy it to the full.” -Leon Trotsky
Aw shucks, thanks. I intended for this to be stand-alone, though… I didn't mean for everyone to jump into this thinking its the new craze. I have quite the pet peeve against doing things to death.
Perhaps… Mann time.
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Harkening back to the roots of my questionable predecessor…
The Insurgency would fall apart without Dr. Martin Caduceus.
Tale, E?
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It might not even fall apart.
What if…
We got more efficient when Cad was out with Quaesitor???
just something to think about.
What if QUAESITOR created the Insurgency in some alternate universe?
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Well, the problem is that I was actually in the middle of writing a tale about this.
Agent E-dit: Damnit replied to wrong post.
Agent E | "Life is beautiful. Let the future generations cleanse it of all evil, oppression and violence, and enjoy it to the full.” -Leon Trotsky
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Agent E | "Life is beautiful. Let the future generations cleanse it of all evil, oppression and violence, and enjoy it to the full.” -Leon Trotsky
Well it spices things up, breaks the monotony. I like it a lot, but maybe that's just me…
Her favored means. Not for convenience - it's because she loves the sounds of the dots and dashes.
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good to know, good to know. I'll have to remember that when writing her in any tales I do.
I think it's fair to make Cad to be in charge of the Quaesitor Canon. Any opposed speak now or forever hold your peace just speak up if you don't want him to be in charge.
QUAESITOR canon? I only wanted to write a tale about her… no need to over-complicate everything, Halsey.
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What?
but enough is never enough is never enough is never enough is never enough is never enough is never enough is never enough is never enough is never enough is never enough is never enough…
I think you get the point…
Halsedit: Besides we already have three with a fourth on the way, why not have a quaesitor story line?
*sigh* Cad…I love you (not as much as her) :). This was great man! I never expected this to happen and im glad it did! She is a lovely eye in the sky. +1
Think for yourself, question authority
Well, give yourself a pat on the back. You've helped made this happen. The original idea for Quasi was yours, so without you, we would have never had this.
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Caaaaad you are amazing this is sooooo good i love this. +1
Also added 'featured-tale' cause someone forgot
1█.) ROMANCE: Earn the approval of the opposite sex to confirm that your article is good.
-AbRAISE's Chat Lecture on Writing
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Love conquers all boundaries.
This is proof of this.
Former CI Wiki Administrator Now just CI Wiki member: | Tuum Est: It's up to you
| Redeem | Rewrite/Reimagine | Delete | Keep As Is |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 2 | 1 | 0 |
Vote
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Voting for rewrite.
Agent E | "Life is beautiful. Let the future generations cleanse it of all evil, oppression and violence, and enjoy it to the full.” -Leon Trotsky
As I have mentioned on #basesix, I will rewrite this due to having an interest in it (I believe my vote has counted there as such). However, due to projects and obligations elsewhere, it may take a while.
GYAH! I rush to defend.
Redeem! Save the satellite!
(Cad, if ur reading this, please let members edit posts to make voting easier)
Speaking as an admin, that is not going to happen, since it makes it very easy to troll people and remove things.
LilyFlower is cute and amazing <3
Speaking as another admin, I have given exactly the permission for members to edit voting posts for the period of this Review, and no longer than that. I will remove those permissions when the Review is done (if you'll to chide me for that, then let's tighten up the review), or when I see fit. It's improbable for your reasons to solidify as far as I know, and I'm not born without reason, so I know when I will remove it.
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Okay. If anything goes wrong, however, I'm removing the permissions until whoever the perpetrator is has been dealt with.
LilyFlower is cute and amazing <3
I vote to redeem.
but if it is totally re-written, permission to copy this and the rest of the quaesitor arc to my sandbox for the memories.
